Monday, May 5, 2014

The Tale of The Depressed Goatee – When TIWs Gather


It was a few months ago when I joined The Iron Writers, and since then, it’s been uphill for me. The confidence I was lacking, the inspiration I needed; I found it all there, being shared out liberally among all the amazing, incredible people who make up the group.

Each and every single writer there is unique in their way, and yet at the same time, they all share one beautiful quality: they know how to have fun.


In between the soul draining, four-element-related challenges that Brian constantly manages to cook up, TIWs keep things going on the group Facebook page, and it looks like one of the job specifications of being an Iron Writer is to be able to embarrass, insult, harass and victimize fellow respected Irons on a constant basis, all in the name of sharing laughs.

 Wars of words rage, and alliances form and break off quicker than those in Westeros; and when the gauntlet is thrown, things are settled in what TIWs call a Grudge Match, which, though I’m still fuzzy about it, I’m willing to try out should the occasion arise.


Suffice it to say that there’s always something interesting or downright hilarious going on there. Most of the time, I watch from the sidelines and poke a cautious needle when the opportunity presents itself, but since I’m still a newbie, I try not to get right down into it.


The unexpected happened, though, when fellow Iron Writer Neal Sayatovich changed his profile picture recently, and in it he displayed a truly magnificent growth of facial hair. It literally begged for comment, and comments did it get, courtesy of yet another talented IW, Dani J Caile.



To understand what came next, you really have to see the picture. Since Neal took the trouble to post his version of events on his blog, I’ll steer you to that, right here.


Now that you’ve seen the picture for yourself, you’ll probably understand why Dani, after seeing it himself, could not leave well enough alone. After this:


…and then this:


…he finally did this:


…and, well, that’s where I come in. No invitation ever gets more open than that; and frankly, I couldn’t help myself, either.

Within about twelve hours, we had created a masterpiece there on that thread, an unprompted, unrehearsed bit of literature that had me crying with laughter at every new paragraph Dani added.


With permission from both Neal, the inspiration, and Dani, the instigator (who also has his telling of the telling of this story on his blog. Read about it right here), I give hereby give you the Tale of Depressed Goatee.

Enjoy:


Dani J Caile:
Neal loved his pet beard. It was the most loyal and warm of all his clumps of facial hair, and on cold wet morning walks it would save its master's chin from the perils of the northern winds.

Me:       
The relationship Neal shared with his goatee went beyond that of mere man and beard. It was a bond of unity, of brotherhood, of love beyond measure.
But neither could have seen how this bond was to be put to the test, when that fateful morning, Neal looked into the mirror to see the newly growing sproutlings of a pair of sideburns.

Dani J Caile:
And there the dilemma began, a rivalry never seen before on the face of Neal. At first the sideburns were mere ornaments, emphasizing the manly contours of his broad face, but then they grew, unabated until they too became a major feature on Neal's facebook profile picture.

Me:       
                        Goatee began to feel it was being left out. All the facebook selfies Neal took now displayed the unabashed glory of those chunky sideburns... and yet never failed to heartlessly crop out the lower half of Goatee's dwindling majesty.

Dani J Caile:      
For a while, all was calm, one existing without the other, each reigning over their own territories of their master's domain, basking in their own prickily existence, until that one fateful day when their hairs intwined...

Me:
                       ...the day when Neal, while stroking Goatee, reached up and began to stroke The Sideburns as well. To Goatee, the abandonment was raw, undefinable. That its strokes were being usurped by stubble of much lower birth....

Dani J Caile:
...and higher altitude. Goatee had no other choice but to summon the help of his dear old friend and patriot, Comb, to suppress and push down The Sideburns' audacity!

Me:       
                        But Comb, though literally a lifelong friend to Goatee, would not take its side. As despair, dismay and hurt grew, Goatee began to lose weight. It would wake up every morning feeling more brittle than the day before, and grew paler as the days passed.

Dani J Caile:
                        It wasn't long before Goatee, once filled with life and vigor hitherto seen upon Neal's face, lost all hope and sadly turned into the bedraggled green mass of facial bristles that can now be witnessed on facebook.

Me:
Remorse overcame The Sideburns. They never meant for Goatee to lose its lustre, shed its shine, turn into the patch of fungus that it resembled now. For the sake of Goatee, their stricken brethren, they decided to let go of life, to moult away and leave Neal's cheeks as soft and as baby's bottom smooth as it had been before the troubles began.

  
What I would have given to see poor Neal’s face when he looked up his Facebook notifications the next morning…

 This was apparently all he could think of to say:



The best thing of all about this is that Dani and I did not say a word to each other from the moment it began until the last bit was over. Only after it was done did we start chatting again via Facebook, and there was general congratulations all round. Moments like these, totally random, unprompted, unexpected moments; well, you make the most of them when they happen.


I’m letting Dani have all the rights to this story. In all fairness, it wouldn’t have started off without his idea of a relay prompt, and besides, he could do a lot more with it than I could right now.


Go ahead and check out Dani J Caile on Blogspot, and Neal Sayatovich on Wordpress, a couple of talented and well respected writers whom I look up to and admire. 


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